Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?

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Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?

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Piano driven.
Has a kind of 70s soft rock sound.
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I didn’t know you played the piano too? I’m impressed. All this and a hell of a handyman.
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sure as long if you use them I get credit. seriously
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Can the lyrics be about Buffy the Vampire Slayer?
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It’s kind of along the lines of Little River Band, Eagles, etc…
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If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
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GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
Need you to send again please
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keyofgee wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 12:57 pm sure as long if you use them I get credit. seriously
Sent to your email
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
Need you to send again please
Done...
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GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:44 pm
VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
Need you to send again please
Done...
Can you send me that without the drum Machine?
And what is the bpm?
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:44 pm
keyofgee wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 12:57 pm sure as long if you use them I get credit. seriously
Sent to your email
Haven't received it. File too big?
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GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
Damn, fool! First Filthy Snake, and now this! You're having horrible luck at getting collaborators!
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:48 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:44 pm
VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pm

Need you to send again please
Done...
Can you send me that without the drum Machine?
And what is the bpm?
Will do. 92...
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 8:44 am Piano driven.
Has a kind of 70s soft rock sound.
I’ll love to give a shot
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I'll give it a shot if I can make the lyrics about how shite Kiss is.
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 8:44 am Piano driven.
Has a kind of 70s soft rock sound.
I didn't realize there were actual musicians on this board! I'll give it a shot!
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:48 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:44 pm
VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pm

Need you to send again please
Done...
Can you send me that without the drum Machine?
And what is the bpm?
Sent, 92 bpm. Send me your track and I'll take a listen and see if inspiration strikes...
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What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
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on the shore of life, waiting to break free
I can feel a cold blue mist arising
from the blackened trees
how long do I wait
how long indeed
it's a cold full moon tonight
and as the shadows flee
now I start to see......

Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
waiting for the key...
Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
wanting more of me .....
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GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
I worked on your riff for a bit.
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
I worked on your riff for a bit.
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
Thanks for the update 'yo...
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I'd be down to check it out.
Could you post a Dropbox or YouTube link?
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VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
I worked on your riff for a bit.
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
ALRIGHT!! Sounds like Filthy Snake is as productive as ever!!!!
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HueyRamone wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 5:38 pm
VinnieVincentsVag wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pm
GreatWhiteSnake wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
I worked on your riff for a bit.
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
ALRIGHT!! Sounds like Filthy Snake is as productive as ever!!!!
VagSnake now...
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HueyRamone wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2024 7:25 pmLazysnake
Lazypost...
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In the dark of night, she takes her stand,
With stakes in hand, she's the chosen one,
Battling demons, her destiny planned,
Buffy the Slayer, under the moon and sun.

(Verse 2)
With friends by her side, she fights the fight,
Against the forces of evil, she'll never tire,
Through every danger, she shines bright,
Buffy the brave, with a heart of fire.

(Verse 3)
From the Hellmouth's depths, she emerges strong,
Defending the world, where others fear to tread,
With every battle, she proves she belongs,
Buffy the protector, with demons to behead.

(Chorus)
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
A hero through and through,
With courage that never wavers,
She'll always see it through.
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
In darkness, she's the light,
With every foe she'll slay,
She'll win the endless fight.
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AI needs to learn to not do the same thing for verses and choruses.
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