Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
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Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Piano driven.
Has a kind of 70s soft rock sound.
Has a kind of 70s soft rock sound.
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
I didn’t know you played the piano too? I’m impressed. All this and a hell of a handyman.
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Jack of all trades
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sure as long if you use them I get credit. seriously
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Can the lyrics be about Buffy the Vampire Slayer?
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It’s kind of along the lines of Little River Band, Eagles, etc…
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Need you to send again pleaseGreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Done...VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pmNeed you to send again pleaseGreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Can you send me that without the drum Machine?GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:44 pmDone...VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 4:47 pmNeed you to send again pleaseGreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
And what is the bpm?
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Haven't received it. File too big?
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Damn, fool! First Filthy Snake, and now this! You're having horrible luck at getting collaborators!GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 3:21 pm If I take a crack at some lyrics will you finally lay some stunt guitar over that riff I sent you?
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Will do. 92...VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:48 pmCan you send me that without the drum Machine?
And what is the bpm?
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
I’ll love to give a shot
Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
I'll give it a shot if I can make the lyrics about how shite Kiss is.
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I didn't realize there were actual musicians on this board! I'll give it a shot!
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
Sent, 92 bpm. Send me your track and I'll take a listen and see if inspiration strikes...VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Thu Feb 15, 2024 5:48 pmCan you send me that without the drum Machine?
And what is the bpm?
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What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
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Re: Any singers/lyricist here want to take a crack at my new song?
on the shore of life, waiting to break free
I can feel a cold blue mist arising
from the blackened trees
how long do I wait
how long indeed
it's a cold full moon tonight
and as the shadows flee
now I start to see......
Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
waiting for the key...
Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
wanting more of me .....
I can feel a cold blue mist arising
from the blackened trees
how long do I wait
how long indeed
it's a cold full moon tonight
and as the shadows flee
now I start to see......
Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
waiting for the key...
Sludgalites, oooh Sludgalites
wanting more of me .....
It's good to be bad
It's the best time you'll ever have
What the hell is this ultra sad
Pray for your cool and work on that ass!
It's the best time you'll ever have
What the hell is this ultra sad
Pray for your cool and work on that ass!
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I worked on your riff for a bit.GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
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Thanks for the update 'yo...VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pmI worked on your riff for a bit.GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
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I'd be down to check it out.
Could you post a Dropbox or YouTube link?
Could you post a Dropbox or YouTube link?
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ALRIGHT!! Sounds like Filthy Snake is as productive as ever!!!!VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pmI worked on your riff for a bit.GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
Don't Damn Me wrote: ↑Tue Sep 12, 2023 7:21 pm Dummy, are you aware that hydroxy-chloroqin and Ivermectin have since been proven effective?
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VagSnake now...HueyRamone wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 5:38 pmALRIGHT!! Sounds like Filthy Snake is as productive as ever!!!!VinnieVincentsVag wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 1:25 pmI worked on your riff for a bit.GreatWhiteSnake wrote: ↑Sat Feb 24, 2024 11:44 am What's up?? Are we dead in the water here? Gaz did you get the guitar track? Does it work? Has anybody contributed any lyrics to your tune yet? Send it to me...
Imported in Cubase.
Cannot get anything solid around it yet.
KeyofG sent me lyrics.
Have not worked on that yet either.
I don’t get much time to work on stuff through the week.
Being lazy today, have not even turned computer on yet.
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Lazysnake
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Lazypost...
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In the dark of night, she takes her stand,
With stakes in hand, she's the chosen one,
Battling demons, her destiny planned,
Buffy the Slayer, under the moon and sun.
(Verse 2)
With friends by her side, she fights the fight,
Against the forces of evil, she'll never tire,
Through every danger, she shines bright,
Buffy the brave, with a heart of fire.
(Verse 3)
From the Hellmouth's depths, she emerges strong,
Defending the world, where others fear to tread,
With every battle, she proves she belongs,
Buffy the protector, with demons to behead.
(Chorus)
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
A hero through and through,
With courage that never wavers,
She'll always see it through.
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
In darkness, she's the light,
With every foe she'll slay,
She'll win the endless fight.
With stakes in hand, she's the chosen one,
Battling demons, her destiny planned,
Buffy the Slayer, under the moon and sun.
(Verse 2)
With friends by her side, she fights the fight,
Against the forces of evil, she'll never tire,
Through every danger, she shines bright,
Buffy the brave, with a heart of fire.
(Verse 3)
From the Hellmouth's depths, she emerges strong,
Defending the world, where others fear to tread,
With every battle, she proves she belongs,
Buffy the protector, with demons to behead.
(Chorus)
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
A hero through and through,
With courage that never wavers,
She'll always see it through.
She's Buffy the Vampire Slayer,
In darkness, she's the light,
With every foe she'll slay,
She'll win the endless fight.
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AI needs to learn to not do the same thing for verses and choruses.
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