GutterCreep wrote:One of those movies that when I got done watching it, I immediately watched it again and found it just as funny and entertaining the second time.

I've only done this once. The movie was Shaun of the Dead.

LOL at me lying. As you can see by the board's reaction to your accusations, everybody really seems to give a fuck about the horrible 'lies' i told. Cool. Now you're muppet butt, bragging about how nobody gives a rat's ass about you either way. :lol: You did lie though. It's back there for everyone...

And lets say i did use colred font and forgot, would me using colored font and forgetting be creepier than you remebering that I used colored font 7 years ago? Creepy I tell ya'. Maybe you should PM him and tell him you're going to beat him up. Apparently you don't think that's at all creepy! :lol:...

When that nym posted here, it was the old ezboard, which didn't even allow colored font. Hold on, soldierunderaman. Are you saying you used the nym "soldierundercommand" only on the old EZBoard? Not this current incarnation of the boards? Let me understand this. Maybe it's me, maybe I'm a...

kriptyc wrote:

Grendel wrote:What do you look like these days? Are you still fat?

no.

Don't fuck with me, Mark. Don't make a fuck out of me.

slicer has no response to JDV greatly improving upon his work.

Yes. He has been owned.

What are you even talking about? You're mentally retarded. That's why people talk to you. Not because you're blowing minds or anything.

Blowing dogs, maybe.

slicer, I don't care about your book. I'm not making suggestions to help you. I'm winding you up so you'll say stupid shit and demonstrate how little you know about writing. So far we've determined: - Everything in your book is based on fact - Lebanese women are the best grievers in the world - Ther...

kriptyc wrote:you fuckers do realize it was an EXCERPT, right?

Right, and if the rest of the book is ANYTHING like that excerpt, your book is 200 pages of absolute drivel.

Also, the more questions we ask about this, the more an actual story starts to surface. If these people were "amputated slowly," why wouldn't you describe that??? Why wouldn't you even mention it? We got your fat ass buying chips and changing your shit-stained sheets but you skip something...

If this was an actual novel written by someone who knows what they're doing, each of those paragraphs would be its own chapter. Chapter 1: Main character is introduced. Chapter 2: Intense vision. Chapter 3: Intense vision continued: Shock and awe! Good grief! Chapter 4: Protagonist considers this ev...

kriptyc wrote:I had no idea you were a middle eastern woman.

So you ask me a question and when I answer it honestly, you get mad at me for not being a middle eastern woman.

It really just reads like a creative writing assignment from a junior high kid with anger problems. The dude has this "vision" of all this shit that happened and describes very little of it. There's marching, some people get their heads cut off, women scream. You're presenting facts with n...

let's say it was your dad who they were executing-assuming your dad is not a total asshole like you--and I decided to make an example of him by slicing off his limbs in six inch sections... My immediate reaction would be horror. Probably some fear for my own safety too. Grief is something I would g...

kriptyc wrote:so you're going to tell me how long the captives were held before the execution...

Uh....isn't that YOUR job?

You're getting mad at people for not knowing how this story is supposed to go. You're the author!

The word "grief" is really the least of his problems but for the record - grief noun  Deep sorrow, esp. that caused by someone's death - she was overcome with grief Trouble or annoyance Now, if I was watching people getting hacked to pieces in front of me, I would not be feeling "deep...

slicer, did the events you described in that excerpt actually happen?

kriptyc wrote:bullshit. I'm telling in the book how it was, not how you think it should be.

It was an execution, not an attack. you are fucking confused like a motherfucker.

None of that shit happened!

I feel like Anne Sullivan. WHAT THE FUCK.

I'm not saying that a person can't scream with grief, you fucking retard.

I'm saying that's not how you would best describe a situation where SOMEONE IS BEING CHOPPED INTO PIECES BY A SWORD.

Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with you?

kriptyc wrote:
Xena screamed with grief at the top of her ...

[douchecunt owned by the warrior princess.]

My bad.

That's clearly an example of exceptional writing. I have been bested!

Um....what about that post makes me a liar?

I posted a fictional conversation based on actual quotes you've made. Doesn't that make me an author?

"The word you're looking for here is THIS." "No! No! That's the exact word I need to use! Why? Because an imaginary woman told me!" "Ooooookay. By the way...what is this even about?" "You're too stupid to understand!" "What exactly do you want me to do wi...

Ask your "editor". :lol: That reminds me! slicer, weren't you paying some editor you found on the internet to help you with this shit? Holy fucking Christ, WHAT DID THAT GUY DO FOR YOU? Did he eventually just give up? You're clearly very stubborn when it comes to suggestions. Seriously. T...

tell me one word that describes grief better than grief. What you're describing isn't grief. WHY AM I EXPLAINING THIS TO A RETARD!!!! Okay, it's grief. Don't try to become a better writer. Continue to self-publish rambling, sub-retarded nonsense that no one would ever buy. Trust me - I like it much...

kriptyc wrote:It is the only word that can describe what she felt.

I assure you it's not.

kriptyc wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usjptZS-_-k

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2V3CfD8TPac

kriptyc wrote:Pon

That's the cream you use to lube up a dog's butthole. I'm pretty sure a jar of cream didn't buy your book either.

kriptyc wrote:I talked to a woman who knew this so well she could feel it in her bones as grief...the image (vision) was hers.

There is no such person.

And if there is, she used the wrong word.

kriptyc wrote: So you bought the book, douchecunt?

You know I didn't.

Total sold: zero...point...zero.

kriptyc wrote:No, they know it is grief...

Who? These fictional characters?

I don't even think they qualify as characters. This all reads like some retard's fever dream. You're the only character in this mess.

forgive your ignorance , because middle eastern women usually do scream with an exclamation point! especially when it comes to amputation and murder which they know/feel/grieve in a way that some mall raised ohio chick could never fathom. You need to grab a thesaurus. The emotion you're trying to i...